If they're refusing the water they're obviously still stressed from bad petshop care and being wild caught and imported.
As for the tank, there are a few problems with it, gravel, especially with that big slope, will trap a lot of waste which can foul your water very quickly if any uneaten food or waste material gets in it, and in addition to that, it can also be swallowed. Sand, bare-bottom, or a siliconed substrate would be ideal, bare-bottom requiring the least amount of work overall.
An unstressed newt thats acting normally, for this specie, is generally fully aquatic and rarely ever leaves the water. A tank for this specie is pretty simple, just filled nearly to the top, with maybe a few pieces of floating cork bark, with a water temp of 73F or lower, and a ton of live plants, and maybe some hides.
If the newts are refusing water, something you could try to do it putting it in a tub(escape-proof with small holes in the lid for ventilation), with a little bit of water and a bunch of live plants, so that they stay wet without being completely underwater. Often this will get the newt used to the water until its ready to go aquatic.
Since you got newts from a petshop(I'm assuming), you probably aren't feeding a proper staple diet either. The staple diet for basically any caudates should consist of chopped or small whole earthworm/nightcrawler or a high quality pellet, though I would advise against the pellets with a gravel substrate, and you can feed frozen foods and other live foods as a treat.
And heres the caresheet for
H. orientalis if you haven't seen it already:
Caudata Culture Species Entry - Cynops orientalis - Chinese firebelly